I'mma Lyricist, can I have cookies?

by **Delightful** Mon Feb 01, 2010 7:47 am

I wroted a song (well, I wrote many, but TBH, I'm only posting because no one else is

).

Praise, love, critisize (and get banned)*. Whee!

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

You know that you are beautiful
And they know what you can give the world
And you’re wondering what you have done
But the moonlight’s blocking out the sun

And you hear

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

And they sing

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

Can you taste the feeling of desire?
Can you touch the heart but not the fire?
Can you help the fear in her eyes?
Does she need to see her heat die?

Do you sing?

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

Does she know?

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

The falling stars hit our seas
As the light burns the sky
And the Earth can’t see forgotten things
But the fire starts to cry

And it sings

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

Can you hear what has begun?
Can you tell if we’ve lost or won?
Can you hate the thing that gave you heat?
Or will you hold your hands up in defeat?

And sing

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

We sing

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

We sing

Oh woah, ooh oh, woah
Oh woah, ooh oh, woah

You know that you are beautiful
Oh woah oh
And they know what you can give the world
Oh woah oh
And you’re wondering what you have done
Oh woah oh
But the moonlight’s blocking out the sun
Oh woah oh

You know that you are beautiful

(I used many Oh's in this, but I don't always. I just like oh's! :D )

*Banning will not happen